A little more care
Good points:
- Good vocal melody
- Decent quality
- Good use of breaks (esp. before the solo)
- Impressive lead guitar
Bad points:
- Take abit more care with your recordings - the vocals are out of tune in some places and there's a couple of mistakes in the solo. These could easliy be rectified with a few more takes.
- The way the guitars end at the 3:28 mark doesn't sound imo - it sounds like you had to go off to answer the phone or you've just thought to yourself "fook it, my hand is knackered"
- For the love of all things replace the awful bass guitar! lol
Overall, it's a good song, I'd give the song/melody a 9/10 but the bad points bring the overall score down to a 7.5/10. Keep on rockin on, man.